Poetry ~ Untamed
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Stick Figures Print
Poetry - Untamed
Written by Scott Eaton
  
Tuesday, 28 April 2009 10:30
Playing with nighttime clay,
crafting simulations . . .

Part of me
wants to see the answer book,
the part that spooks
its own shadow;
but the child in me
wants to play,
to cut newspaper clippings
from holiday trash
and dance around the pyres
of conquered fears.

Smile . . .
I like yr smile . . .
Night swimming quiet
summer nights,
air so warm
you disappear . . .

We dance the ceremony,
gifting quiet cues,
like stick figures
growing flesh.
 
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Stick Figures
Apr 14 2009 15:24:12
Playing with nighttime clay,
crafting simulations . . .

Part of me
wants to see the answer book,
the part that spooks
its own shadow;
but the child in me
wants to play,
to cut newspaper clippings
from holiday trash
and dance around the pyres
of conquered fears.

Smile . . .
I like yr smile . . .
Night swimming quiet
summer nights,
air so warm
you disappear . . .

We dance the ceremony,
gifting quiet cues,
like stick figures
growing flesh.
#218
Re:Stick Figures
Apr 15 2009 00:02:55
I like this - gentle, moonlit - caresses the senses. It's like a sheer silk tapestry, etched with crimson embers.

One question -
I like yr smile . . .

Intentional? Works, in my opinion - subtly adds a degree of playful intimacy that gives the whole scene a shiver of life.

Beautiful work - I think we should be publishing this...
#221
Re:Stick Figures
Apr 15 2009 03:04:36
*blush* Thank you very much. I spent a lot of time on this piece. Yes, the 'yr' line is intentional for the reasons you mentioned. I'm going to go dance around the backyard now
#222
Re:Stick Figures
Apr 16 2009 21:00:02
#224

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On Myself, On Thought, On Edward Weston's Photo Print
Poetry - Untamed
Written by Rebecca Thurber
  
Tuesday, 21 April 2009 21:52

Do you know how she became like this?—

Breaking into fragments

and mixing with the sand.

She was monumental.

She lay across the Rocky Mountains,

but now she is eroding.

 

Look at her—

At the shadows made by the angles of her jagged bones.

You may see her in segments,

Love her in portions—

her distance and misery,

the erotic tingle nudging at your senses 

her restless, pleading eyes.

She begs to sink into the sand

and suffocate in vastness;

instead you surround her with your arms and mind.

She fades into you 

 

You: mountaineer— You had

trudged across her sloping breasts—

explored the concave of her thighs;

You collected the dirt form the tread of your shoes,

and grew plants from that soil

that wilted, black, as your memory faded. 

 

Yet you have contained her.

She has settled in garden pots,

and gathers under your fingernails.

Encounters pieces of herself there,

that are not pieces of herself any longer, for

now she is the dirt stains on your hands,

the work-stains of a life

dedicated to constructing mountains.  

 
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Submission Print
Poetry - Untamed
Written by Caribou Slim
Just as a sapless tree will split and decay, so an inflexible force will meet defeat. The hard and mighty lie beneath the ground, while the tender and weak dance on the breeze above.
  
Tuesday, 21 August 2001 22:25
I have wandered the corridors of my death
Marveled at the sculptures cast
in memory
Golden and ebony
Painted my blood along the walls
calmly
Carved my name across the floor with my fingernails
Heard my last breath echoing through the empty halls
paused
Smiled, listening to its quiet melody

I could remain there forever
voiceless
Watching you slip coi-like through the pool
of a garden mind
Swirling through sight like night through dream
Collecting screams
Belly laughs, scars
Orgasm
Kisses, bruises
Stones cast shoreward by the surf

I have always loved you
Because you were not gentle
When you tore my voice free
Lifting me bloody and squawling to the sun
to the vultures
to the hungry air
Drawing life from my lips like a lullaby
Drawing tears from my silent eyes
Their salt a sweet gift to a newborn tongue
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Angelfire Print
Poetry - Untamed
Written by Caribou Slim
Just as a sapless tree will split and decay, so an inflexible force will meet defeat. The hard and mighty lie beneath the ground, while the tender and weak dance on the breeze above.
  
Thursday, 22 February 2001 23:54
"don't worry, it's all Good"

In the asphalt valleys
where the billboards war

and the desert draws kisses
down through the floor

the glitterwhores call
Golden and lush

from their bonfire ballrooms
in their amphetamine rush
Read more...
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Selections from the Library

Stick Figures

by Scott Eaton
Playing with nighttime clay,
crafting simulations . . .

Part of me
wants to see the answer book,
the part that spooks
its own shadow;
but the child in me
wants to play,
to cut newspaper clippings
from holiday trash
and dance around the pyres
of...
Read more...

On Myself, On Thought, On Edward Weston's Photo

by Rebecca Thurber
Do you know how she became like this?—
Breaking into fragments
and mixing with the sand.
She was monumental.
She lay across the Rocky Mountains,
but now she is eroding.
 
Look at her—
At the shadows made by the angles of her jagged bones.
You may...
Read more...

Submission

by Caribou Slim
I have wandered the corridors of my death
Marveled at the sculptures cast
in memory
Golden and ebony
Painted my blood along the walls
calmly
Carved my name across the floor with my fingernails
Heard my last breath echoing through the empty halls
paused
...
Read more...

Angelfire

by Caribou Slim
"don't worry, it's all Good"

In the asphalt valleys
where the billboards war

and the desert draws kisses
down through the floor

the glitterwhores call
Golden and lush

from their bonfire ballrooms
in their amphetamine rush
 ...
Read more...


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